Writer's Journal # 9

"We must accept human error as inevitable- and design around that fact.”(Donald Berwick) After my peer-reviewed, my essay they had given me a lot of insight into the essay which helped me understand how to make it better. They explained to me my grammar and punctuation points that needed put in certain places since I had forgotten them. I ran off subject in a few sentences and they had shown me what sentence I went off subject in and help me figure out what I was trying to say. My peer showed me that I had cited quotes or articles wrong and that I needed a cited page after the essay.

All of the things that I had missed in my essay won’t take that long because of the fact they are the smaller errors that I had missed. I will go back read my entire essay and make sure makes sense beginning to end and double check punctuations. All of mistakes that I did need to be fixed because they are required in the requirements of the essay. They wont take to make of my my time just due to the fact that they were only minor errors.

First, I read through my essay and make sure it makes sense beginning and to end and make all the errors I need to go back to. Second I will go back and fix grammatical errors an any other errors. Then, I will read it once again and make sure I got every detail and all of citations correct. Finally, I will do my citied work page when I do this I will go back through my process and get where I got the quotes and articles. The most important thing in the revision process is the citation page because if someone wants finish reading the article that you had put in the essay you should the website at the end so they can go read it.